Following this, we had a face to face review session with our teacher, who offered feedback and suggestions based on our pitch. Whilst our basic premise was agreed, there were concerns involving our location; our teacher felt the mise-en-scene of an older and more stylised house may work better. There were also concerns involving the use of Paranormal Investigators as characters; our teacher felt we would not become attached to them enough as an audience, making their deaths have far less weight emotionally. In our 'responses to feedback' section you can find a more detailed account of our feedback and our actions in response.