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Responses to Feedback

Following our pitch and subsquent feedback session, several notable areas for improvement were found in our work...

Following our test shoot, it was decided that our location did not fit stylistically with the central prop, the Jack-in-the-Box. We decided to seek out a more appropriate location.

This location came in the form of the house of a close friend of mine, which was large, stylised and grand; exactly what we had been advised to look for. 

We were also advised to remove the Paranormal Investigators from the story, as the viewer would likely have trouble caring for them as they were killed. As such, we needed to think of a new supporting character.

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